I'm ganna Start writing my story on here but it dosen't have a name yet, because when I name it I always stop writing it, so here goes. And please comment on it.
Chapter 1
As the rain fell hard, in big drops wa walked slowly. The glomy dark shadows of the trees, tall and bushy played tricks onour minds. I could feel the fresh tingling, cuts on my raw feet start to numb. The needle like pain stot up through on ankles, I guess I should be use to this by now. I could feel the cheek swelling, as it throbbed, I can hear my pulse throb through every vein in my run down body.
"Kira?" Said my ragged Younger Brother. His long brown curly hair, draping down over his pale face. A tiny, or skranny guy but kinda tall, well taller than me....
"Yeah Kyle. What is it?"
He pause's and bites his lower lip with a grin.
"What!?"
Me and him have always been real close. Always there for eachother I mean if we arn't, we'd have no one to lean on... But sometimes he can be irratateing! Like say'in somethin' and then-
"Oh nothing sis." Taking it back, which is extreamly annoying, cuz' what if it's really important, plus i'm just curious.